Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

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the media and computer games expose an adverse impact on the community while some people thought these factors have no damaging effect on people. In my opinion,

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would argue that

violence

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have

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significant impact on

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society. One of the key

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is that more and more children are access to the internet and watching television in recent years. To illustrate,

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youngsters,

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especially

especilly

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children are easily influenced by what they see on the screen and they will try to ape

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violence

activity.

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can lead to

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at school and even family.

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people who are

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victim of

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activities

acitivities

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, they may feel scared and have depression.

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case in Vietnam, which stem from a teenager who play

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violence

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game and

then

accidently

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left his

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son

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dead

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in the forest because he was trying to copy the character. Another reason is that we may think

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is normal after a long time. If we watch television or

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game

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which

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violence

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scene

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at a high frequency, it may

affected

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our

mind

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to think those aggressive actions are normal since we see them

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frequently on

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frequently on

screen.Over time, we may become less sympathetic

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others. In conclusion,

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is not a country's problem but every

nations's

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problem.

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Government

Gorvernment

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Government

should try to reduce the time of

violence

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scenes and

violence

should go along with education to avoid its risk.