Today we can see overconsumption of natural resources such as air, fresh water, and oil and so on. The usage is increasing as a very dangerous pace and is already reaching critical levels. What are the reasons contributing to this? What should be done to minimize this?

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these
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people
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or store natural
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resources
like
air
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fuel
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and many
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are polluted.
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consumed
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polluted water and
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created.
therefore
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future when
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in
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natural
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point reached.
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decrease consumption.
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Government
should take taxes on
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of natural
resource
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people
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store Oil because they know in future
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illegally
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therefore
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should take action or
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people
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reduce
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air
pollution
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warming problem. So, natural
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been polluted which
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already
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already
create
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critical
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situation on the earth.
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,
government
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the government
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should take action and
people
should
also
support the
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rule.
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