Some people think that climate change could have a negative effect on business. Other people think that climate change could create more business opportunities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, the issues of global
climate
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increased which
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directly
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on
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business
. Some people argue that
variation
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in
weather
conditions
might cause
of
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irreversible to damage the
business
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while
,
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individuals think that
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climate
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more opportunities
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work. I
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discuss both points of view and give my personal opinion on
this
matter. Examining the
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former
view, there are many
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negative
effects of
climate
breakdown. The
business
of agriculture and fishing industries
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effected
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affected
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to
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by
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weather
conditions
.
For example
, these days farmers do not grow sufficient seasonal
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crops
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because of
climate
change. Sometimes in the monsoon season no rain so,
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yield
has become
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decreased
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.
Therefore
, farmers have no money to harvest other crops and market demand has
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increased.
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the
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results
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, inflation has
been
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increased.
Moreover
, the
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of
weather
condition
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of
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sea
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level has
become
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significantly increased so, it
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on
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fishing industries.
On the other hand
, for many companies, the changing
weather
conditions
are
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way to grow.
This
is because
climate
changes
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change
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create
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new demands.
For instance
, In 2019, Dehli was covered to smoke in the month of October and
according to
the survey of
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of India in
this
month
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sales
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of air-purified and anti-pollution
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increased by around 100%.
Likewise
, poor rainfall
rise
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raises
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demand
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of
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rain water
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harvesting has
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increased. In the same way , hotter
summer
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summers
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provide manufacturers a great opportunity to sell more fans and air-conditioners. In conclusion, some people argue
business
depends on
weather
conditions
and it creates
nagative
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negative
affects
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effects
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on the
business
.
While
,
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others convey that
business
depends on
weather
but
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also
it gives opportunities
many
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companies.
However
, my opinion is that later
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because the
business
are capable
for
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the changing needs of society.
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