Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?
In recent decades, there are several arguments about whether the violent
scenes
on television
and in computer games
exert an adverse influence on the community or not. I will provide my own opinion in this
essay before a conclusion is given. On the one hand, many people
have a view that violence which involves on television
or games
can cause numerous negative impacts on our society. It is true that violent scenes
that children
watch on television
are one of the main culprits to some negative awareness and children
's thoughts. For instance
, when they watch a blockbuster movie with some scene in which there is a fight or war, they may not realize that it is bad behavior
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behaviour
As a result
, some of them would try to imitate those scenes
and has violent tendencies when they grow up. However
, not only children
suffer from this
phenomenon but also
adults who have been affected by these scenes
since they were young age. Thus
, I believe that children
should be controlled strictly in order not to have too heavy exposure to violent scenes
. On the other hand
, others suppose that violent factors are not related to people
's negative behaviors
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behaviours
This
can be construed as that violent scenes
just often exist in a movie or fighting games
. Therefore
, it is crucial that people
must have a good awareness of these issues and not follow what they witness or watch, which is violent. I believe that if we just watching on television
or play violent games
for entertainment and relaxation and know how to control it, it will not result in any serious effect on society. In conclusion, whereas there is a controversial debate on this
problem, I personally argue that people
should raise awareness and watch movies or play games
with scenes
of violence in a safe and reasonable way.Submitted by thaiannt on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion