You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel for making the arrangements. In your letter mention when you will be arriving and leaving, mention what type of rooms you would like and the price charged during the weekend also inquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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to inform you about my decision to spend the coming weekend in your California Beach Hotel along with my family, comprising of 4 people.

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, we will check in on Friday evening by 7pm and will possibly check out on Sunday afternoon around 4pm. I would appreciate it if you could let me know about the rooms and their charges, especially on the weekends.

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, I would prefer a room with extra beds and space where my children can stay with me and my wife, as they are too young to stay alone. My eldest is 5 and my youngest is 3 years old,

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, we would like to do activities of their interest.

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as shallow swimming, boat rowing, seashell collection and visit to nearby lakes or ports. Could you possibly provide me with detailed information about similar places we can visit during our stay so that we make our plans

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? I will look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Leo

anniezafar3Tue Nov 29 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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170 words

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