You have organized 90th birthday of your relative and invited elderly guests also. It was a successful party. Write a letter to the hotel manager to provide the feedback. In your letter you should tell - When the party was - Why it was successful - Thank for a staff member who was really helpful

Dear Sir or Madam, I am Erica and I had my 90th birthday party at Geroge Restaurant
last
week. I am writing
this
letter to express my appreciation.
This
party was held on 2nd December, in order to celebrate my 90th birthday.
Also
, there were 15 elderly guests and they were both my good friends. It was a challenge for your restaurant to cook and arrange seats. But beyond my expectations, the party was fully successful. Both my friends and I had an enjoyable time there. The food was tasty and suitable for everyone. Your chef adjusted the menu in order to cater to everyone's stomach. The waiter called Emily was enthusiastic and patient. She kept asking us whether there were any uncomfortable
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needs.
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, she helped us coordinate the private room
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so that nobody would influence us. I am very grateful for all you have done. Without the good service of your restaurant , I would not have had an impressive and happy birthday. Thanks again! Yours faithfully, Erica Xia
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