Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter: • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear

Mrs.

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Barrett, I am writing in connection with your published advertisement in Sunday Observer on

last

Sunday 20th

with

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regarding your request for support to you

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your home for

upcoming

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the upcoming

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summer. My name is Jessica and I am a student at the

University

of London. I believe that people must help

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others when they need support.

As a result

, I found you while searching

help

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needing

hand

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to give

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full of my kindness. I am

best

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charity worker in the

university

with

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membering

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remembering

the

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of the

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University

charity organization

also

. Due to my charity work experience, I can handle

the

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your

day to day

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works

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especially washing your clothes, Mopping the floors, dishwashing the dishes and any extra help

which

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apply

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you request.

Besides

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I have

best

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culinary abilities

that

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mean I could prepare your meals. I promise you definitely appreciate me.

However

, due to my studies, I have to participate

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daytime lectures at

University

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weekdays.

Consequently

, I can help you on weekdays

8.00

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from 8.00

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AM to 10.00 AM and 5.00 PM to 8.00PM.

In addition

, I will help you on

full

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day because I have

free

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a free

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schedule

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the weekends. So if

you

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areyou

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suitable

this

times, please let me know. Yours

Sincerly

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Sincerely

, Jessica

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
27Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

205 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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