You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.

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is to inform you that I

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Jany George

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attended an office meeting at your hotel

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Sunday 14th November, and had a stay for two days i.e Saturday and Sunday. Honestly, it was an amazing experience at your place.

Hospitality

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you provided for the guest was unique and pleasing. Staff were very

co-operative

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and at a service at once. I strongly appreciate your work and management.

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of Jour hotel was

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excellent that we enjoyed all our official

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very lightly.

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your management.

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services, after arriving at my

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to say that I realise that I had left my important folder at your place. With my sharp

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I am sure that I have left my valuable beneath the pillow in the

alloted

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room on 1st floor R.M No:- 12.

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folder

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very important papers which I have to submit

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Government

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office before

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date. They are very much important. I request you to please inform your

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room keeper

to have a check for the same. If you get it please send it to my

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by courier. I

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assure

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pay the charges by any

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you desire to have. Thanks in advance, and sorry for

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you will have.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

220 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inform you that I believe I left some important papers at your hotel.
To the best of my recollection, I left the papers in the conference room.
These papers are of utmost importance as they contain confidential business information.
I kindly request that you or your staff check the conference room and securely send the papers to my address.

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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.

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Some people encourage young children to leave their parents' house as soon as they become adults while others say children should stay at their parents' house as long as possible.

Many people choose to travel abroad to learn a foreign language instead of studying in their home town. Do the advantages of learning a new language in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Discuss the importance of art education in schools. How does exposure to art impact students' creativity and overall development?

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.