People today increasingly use credit cards to make monthly purchases. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Few individuals think that
cutting edge
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cutting-edge
technology
is making individuals sociable, whereas others think it is making them less sociable. In my opinion, technology
can be an effective means of communication. After all, everything is becoming a digital system these days.
On the one hand, modern technology
, such
as smartphones, has made people
comfortable communicating and communicating. Indeed, the world is quickly becoming a global hub where people
are comfortable interacting and communicating with others without having to meet them physically. In my opinion, this
is good for those who are shy or don't want to show up. Nowadays, many people
work or find jobs with the help of modern technology
, the Internet. According to statistics, in Kazakhstan, when there was no internet, there were very few employees, and now many of them work online and wages rose by forty percent
.
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per cent
On the other
hand
there is a negative side. Add a comma
,hand
Technology
develops as much, all data is stored in them. And not a few people
have faced the problem of this
technology
. For example
: hacking, cyber attack
, Fix the agreement mistake
attacks
fraud
. In fact, there was even a break-in at the banks. In Correct word choice
and fraud
this
case, the bank and ordinary people
suffered.
To conclude, modern technology
has improved the lives of many people
by making communication easy. People
should endeavor
to utilize these innovative advancements to stay abreast of digital trends.Change the spelling
endeavour
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite