the charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

the charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The bar graphs compare the proportion of
water
consumption in three major categories by six distant areas of the world.
It is clear that
North
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America
and
Europe
water
usage was mainly for industrial purposes.
However
, other places use
water
mainly for agriculture.
Europe
is the highest area in industrial
water
consumption
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about 53% which is more than North
America
by 5%.
Moreover
, in both areas , nearly
one third
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of
water
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farming procedures at 32% for
Europe
and 39% for North
America
. Citizens of
Europe
consume 15% of
whole
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water
supply compared to 13% of people living in North
America
. In the rest of
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, more than
two thirds
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of
water
are used for watering crops and central Asia countries use nearly 90% of total
water
for
this
purpose. Using
water
in
industry
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is less than 10% in Africa and Central Asia and just above 10% in South East Asia. Among all countries, domestic use is the highest in South
America
by about 20% of the whole
water
provided.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
  • variations
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