You would like a temporary job working in a summer camp which runs sports and outdoor activities for children and young people next summer. Write a letter to the organizers of the summer camp. In your letter: 1. Explain what sort of job you would like to do.2. Describe your personality.3. Say what experience and skills you have.

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Dear Sir, I'm writing today to express my interest in the job opening at the summer camp, whereby I would like to apply for the position of Head

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Coach. From the very beginning, since my school days

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fact, I have been indulged in physical activities

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as athletics, the 100-meter dash and various other sports.

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has always been the main area of my interest. As an individual, I find myself extremely fit, and I feel active enough to be up to any challenge thrown my way. I'm extroverted and friendly

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and love to interact with aspiring athletes who want to prove their mettle in the sport of

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. As far as my experience is concerned, I have taken part in various

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tournaments and have won a few as well. The most challenging one will have to be the Regional-Zonal

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tournament which was held back in my college. I was blessed with the opportunity of competing against players of different physical capabilities. I'm glad to

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mention here that we won that tournament, all thanks to our coach back in the day. Because at the end of the day, a team is only as good as its coach. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Fahad

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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