The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Compare it

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Compare it
The pie charts compare the
percentage
of
students
in Britain who were bilingual, multilingual and those who spoke
English
only at one University in England in the years 2000 and 2010.
It is clear that
Spanish was the highest learnt language among
students
.
Additionally
, more of the
students
decided to learn other languages
beside
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English
at the end
of the ten-year period. In 2000, 30% of
students
were able to speak in Spanish and
English
and
this
proportion had increased by 5% to reach 35% in 2010.
However
, the reverse occurred for French as 15% of
students
had learnt it until 2000 and
this
percentage
dropped to 10% in 2010. Surprisingly, the
percentage
of
students
who can speak German language only
in addition
to
English
remained the same in both years at 10%. About 10% of
students
were able to speak using one other language in 2000.
This
figure doubled reaching 20% in 2010. Multilingual
students
comprised 15% in 2010
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an increase of 5%
than in
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2000. In 2000, about one-fifth of
students
were speaking in
English
only, but that
percentage
dropped to its half at 10% in 2010.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportions
  • British students
  • university
  • speaking other languages
  • language proficiency
  • overall trends
  • comparison
  • 2000
  • 2010
  • chart
  • data
  • percentage
  • significant
  • increase
  • decrease
  • noteworthy
  • comparative analysis
  • improvement
  • decline
  • conclusion
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