The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Compare it

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Compare it
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The pie charts compare the
percentage
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of
students
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in Britain who were bilingual, multilingual and those who spoke
English
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only at one University in England in the years 2000 and 2010.
It is clear that
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Spanish was the highest learnt language among
students
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.
Additionally
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, more of the
students
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decided to learn other languages
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English
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at the end
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of the ten-year period. In 2000, 30% of
students
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were able to speak in Spanish and
English
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and
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proportion had increased by 5% to reach 35% in 2010.
However
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, the reverse occurred for French as 15% of
students
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had learnt it until 2000 and
this
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percentage
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dropped to 10% in 2010. Surprisingly, the
percentage
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of
students
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who can speak German language only
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to
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remained the same in both years at 10%. About 10% of
students
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were able to speak using one other language in 2000.
This
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figure doubled reaching 20% in 2010. Multilingual
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comprised 15% in 2010
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an increase of 5%
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2000. In 2000, about one-fifth of
students
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were speaking in
English
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only, but that
percentage
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dropped to its half at 10% in 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, students, english with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportions
  • British students
  • university
  • speaking other languages
  • language proficiency
  • overall trends
  • comparison
  • 2000
  • 2010
  • chart
  • data
  • percentage
  • significant
  • increase
  • decrease
  • noteworthy
  • comparative analysis
  • improvement
  • decline
  • conclusion
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