Write a letter to a hotel manager in another city for an upcoming 2 days business trip for you and your colleagues. In your letter you should tell - Introduce yourself and colleagues - give information about the business meeting - tell other requests you might have

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Dear Sir I am writing to express my interest in your inn, in view of the fact I am an executive director of " Bright Industry" which produced premium glass windows and doors in our city .

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after 2 ,days I organized a business trip for my counterparts in your city.

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we are verge to stay in your motel because I heard your guesthouse has a luxury conference hall for a business meeting. As I mentioned before our partners are really noble and reputable people who help and support our company.I believe that your hostel lend a hand to me in

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I have a few problems with my coworkers .

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of all one of my teammates have an allergy to chemicals

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as chlorine and others . You should have been informed that I and my partners are vegetarian, I hope you take

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problem into your consideration And the final one is I am aware of what your guesthouse situated near the sea ,

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would be grateful that to register our room will apparent views and scenery from the window . We opened the windows and watch the sunset after an essential meeting Looking forward to a quick respond Yours faithfully Mr Robert

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

211 words

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Write a letter to a hotel manager in another city for an upcoming 2 days business trip for you and your colleagues. In your letter you should tell - Introduce yourself and colleagues - give information about the business meeting - tell other requests you might have

A noticeable lack of students opting for science subjects at universities is observed in various countries. What are the reasons and what are the effects on society?

some people think that competition at work, at school, in daily life is a good thing. others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that advertising is extremely succesfull at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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