Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 per cent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. Do you agree?

In

Linking Words

first world

Add a hyphen

first-world

show examples

countries

Use synonyms

, a significant amount of high-level jobs are occupied by males

although

Linking Words

the employment of

females

Use synonyms

in

countries

Use synonyms

is greater than

men

Use synonyms

while it is often opined that

women

Use synonyms

should

also

Linking Words

be appointed to higher posts.

However

Linking Words

, I agree with the above statement and will explicate my point of view.

To begin

Linking Words

with,

women

Use synonyms

should give equal rights in job sectors .

Women

Use synonyms

have the potential for task achievement and responsibility. It is to say that,

females

Use synonyms

take the duty and passionately try to accomplish the work within time as compared to

men

Use synonyms

.

For instance

Linking Words

, according to research in Pakistan, a tenacious task is given to both genders and it is observed that

women

Use synonyms

fulfil their tasks timely and efficiently while

men

Use synonyms

do not take them seriously and try to find shortcuts to complete them.

Therefore

Linking Words

, in some

Use synonyms

countries

Add a comma

,countries

show examples

a rule is passed to hire one-

third

Linking Words

of

females

Use synonyms

for the effective performance of the organizations.

Furthermore

Linking Words

,

females

Use synonyms

are more courteous and hospital. They provide a friendly environment to their employees which accelerates worker productivity. To be more specific,

women

Use synonyms

are generous and kind to their employees; they feel mental satisfaction at their job.

for example

Linking Words

, in

Japan

Add a comma

,Japan

show examples

according to a survey of multi-national ,companies the dropout ratio of the recruiter is lesser; staff feel comfortable under the supervision of a female manager. To conclude, numerous well-reputed jobs are take-over by

men

Use synonyms

while employment of

females

Use synonyms

is almost more than males in advanced

countries

Use synonyms

.

Nonetheless

Linking Words

, the ability of

women

Use synonyms

should

also

Linking Words

consider in institutes as it is essential for ameliorating the productivity of an association.