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Today, many people use the internet and smartphones to transfer money to friends, family, and businesses. Is this a positive or negative development?

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In today’s contemporary world, as social media and modern technologies have become an integral part of our lives, it has changed the way of sending and
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receiving
reciving
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receiving
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cash
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such
 as from friends, relatives and businesses. From my point of view,
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transferring
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transfering
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transferring
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money
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 the aid of the internet and mobile phones is a positive development and
this
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first
 reason why it is a positive development is that
,
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 it is considered one of the easiest and fastest ways of
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transferring
transfering
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transferring
money
 to other people
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with in
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 a short period of time without waiting in
a crowded places
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such
 as national banks.
Furthermore
,
this
 process
also
 gives an opportunity for humans to transfer their
cash
 to
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further
 locations.
For example
, majority of the parents send
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money
 to their children who are studying
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abroad countries
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 the aid of the internet since it is possible to transfer
the
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 certain
amount
 of
money
 from one account to another
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through
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distance. To be sure,
this
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money converting
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 process can be dangerous since nowadays
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 number of hackers
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 increasing day by day
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therefore
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 possibility of being under a cyber attack while
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transferring
transfering
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transferring
 the
money
.
For instance
, these days majority of the business owners have accomplished
about
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the
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 number of
cyber attacks
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 while
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transfering
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transferring
the
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 certain
amount
 of
money
.
In addition
 to
this
,
this
 process might require
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additional
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expenses
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expences
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 while
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transferring
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transferring
 a big
amount
 of
money
,
however
, it is not considered much
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while
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 sending a small
amount
 of
cash
. To conclude, having weighed
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everything
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, I
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that
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transferring
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transferring
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money
 from one account to another is not a negative development in human history,
instead
, it allows us to send our
cash
 in
a
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 easier and faster way while giving a chance to
transfering
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transfer
transferring
 the
money
 to the
further
 locations of the world.
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