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Today, many people use the internet and smartphones to transfer money to friends, family, and businesses. Is this a positive or negative development?

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This days
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, more and more humans can’t
emporary
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temporary
 world, social media and technology
has
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 created a number of opportunities for individuals to
transfer
money
 to friends, family members or business. What do you think is it positive or negative development
.
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 From my point of view transferring
money
by
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 the internet is
positive
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 development. On the one hand, transferring
money
 via the Internet is so convenient that they can deal with numerous problems in daily life. In the past, if people wanted to
transfer
money
 to someone, they had to spend a great amount of
time
 going to the banks and doing various receipts to be able to
transfer
money
 for someone. Nowadays, due to the convenience of useful applications, they can
transfer
 everywhere
in
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 every
time
 they need for several purposes.
Moreover
, these systems
also
 allow them to keep
its
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 own records easily after transferring
money
.
On the other hand
, online transfers are convenient for the vast majority. In the past, when families wanted to
transfer
money
 to their children, they had to spend a lot of
time
 going to the bank and doing various paperwork to be able to
transfer
money
 to their children. Nowadays, the use of online
money
transfer
 services helps people save a lot of
time
 going to the bank and receiving
money
 faster. Online transfers not only save
time
,
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 but
also
 allow for more flexible services. Users can
transfer
 funds to multiple parties, track their transactions, cancel them or request refunds. Especially the system will keep its own records easily. To conclude, the internet makes our life easier by giving us the ability to
transfer
 and do online banking without going to the bank or being worried about the bank’s working
time
 which in my opinion, is really beneficial for every human.
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