You bought a TV a week ago but when you got home you discovered it did not work properly. You called customer service to report the problem but you have not yet received any help. - introduce yourself - explain the problem - and state what action you would like from tge company

Dear Mrs Smith, I am writing
this
letter to report the
faultly
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faulty
fault
TV
which I purchased from your company on Monday
last
week. I am one of your frequent customers and have been using your services and purchasing your products since 2019. On Monday, I visited your store to purchase a new
TV
. I bought LG LED
TV
which has the code NX 917 2d.
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Furthermore
Forthemore
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Furthermore
, I was assured that
this
was the latest model and the best there was to buy.
However
, when I got home, after that my all desires turned into
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disappointment
dissopointment
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disappointment
because I faced
defective
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a defective
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product. I called your customer service representative immediately on Monday and I was assured that my
TV
would be replaced within 2 days. I hope
this
problem would be resolved as soon as possible. I expect to receive a replacement product or have my new
TV
repaired only if it could be done within a day. I look forward to hearing back from you immediately. Yours faithfully Diana Carmell
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