Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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be of the view, that all institute
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they match. Alternative trust
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and technology. Discuss both these
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hand, University students are already aware of their subject likings and dislike and following it they can achieve their
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from a heart in any
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can drive a person in
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crazy way, making them
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which are proposed and advised to study like
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and technology, the students have been seen to have not much of
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in learning
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they just make a
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and hardly do a better carrier
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in
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and tech,
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compelling
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. In conclusion, studying
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's favourite subject always brings greater
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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