The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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a current industrial area to the east of Correct your spelling
show
Norbitonand
redevelopment plans.
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Norbiton and
Overall
, the goal is to redevelope
into a residential neighbourhood with additional housing and other supporting facilities.
Currently, there is a roundabout that connects a southern and an eastern Correct your spelling
develop
redevelop
redeveloped
road
, with several factories in that area that are to be removed in the redevelopment.
The area around the eastern road
is to be for housing, a school at the end
, and a playground to the north. Another road
is planned to be added north from the round about
and over a river, with housing along the western side of the Correct your spelling
roundabout
road
. The farmland north of the river is to be replaced by additional ousing
where a Correct your spelling
housing
using
road
parallel to the river is to be cnstructed
and linked to the northbound Correct your spelling
constructed
instructed
road
. There are also
plans to construct another road
northwest from
the roundabout. More housing is to be built along one side and Change preposition
of
at the end
of this
road
.
To the southwest of the roundabout, shops are planned to be constructed. Across the street to the southeast is to be a medical centre. A second roundabout is also
to be added where the south road
currently meets the main road
in a T-intersection.Submitted by enaughetheresa on
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