As part of a student social survey project, you are organising a group to visit a historical exhibition in a small town, Write a letter asking for information regarding such things as the contents of the exhibition, and the dates of its opening and closing, and if there are any discounts available.

Dear Sir / Madam, Greetings of the day! I am writing

this

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letter to inquire

further

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details about the historical

exhibition

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at Batavia

which

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, which

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is usually

organized

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organised

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around

fall

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the fall

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season during the month of September. I am a Sociology major

student

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apply

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the

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apply

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Ohio University. I am working on arranging a visit to the

hostorical

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historical

exhibition

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for our final semester project

which

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requires conducting a social survey on historical

artifacts

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artefacts

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and culture. In order to prepare

relevant

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a relevant

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survey questionnaire for the

project

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project,

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I request more information on the historical displays at the

exhibition

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this

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year.

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, please let me know the dates of the

exhibition

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, day timings for the visitors, including any special events that may be useful for our study. We are a group of 15 students who would need full access tickets to the historical

exhibition

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for the entire duration of the event. Are there any discounts or promotions for a bulk inquiry, especially considering the student project cause? Your consideration will be much appreciated. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours

Faithfully

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faithfully

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, Darshit Nimavat

vimzauthority

Dec 9, 2022

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grammar

Fix small mistakes like 'hostorical' and 'Sociology major student'. Use 'historical' and 'a sociology major'.

organization

Split the letter into short parts: intro, body with requests, and closing.

content

Be clear with asks. List each point in its own line or sentence: contents, dates, timings, and any discounts for a group.

tone

Keep a formal tone throughout and sign your full name.

content

The aim is clear; the letter asks for what is needed.

tone

The tone is polite and formal.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

177 words

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In some places, old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important.

All nations on the planet have a responsibility to lessen the greenhouse gases that they emit. Although this can be very difficult for developing countries, they also need to make significant reductions. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Learning English at schools is often seen as more important than local languages. If these are not taught many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it more important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure survival of local languages and if so, how?