The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. IELTS Cambridge 14 Pie Charts
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The bar charts manifest the average percentages of saturated fats,
sodium
and added sugars in typical meals consumed in the USA.
Overall
, it is noticeable that dinner accounts for the majority of sodium
and saturated fat, while
snacks account for the main contribution of added sugar
.
First of all, it is clear that
sodium
contributed the most for dinner which was 43%, followed by saturated fat and added sugar
with 37% and 23% respectively. On the other hand
, lunch consisted of sodium
the most with 29% followed by saturated fat and added sugar
. It reveals that sodium
comprises the main regular meal.
Furthermore
, it is noticeable that snacks contained the majority of added sugar
which was 42%, whilst, saturated fat and sodium
distributed less than a quarter.By contrast
, the contribution of breakfast is more evenly distributed as saturated fat and added sugar
shared the same percentage of 16%, whereas
sodium
attributed 14%.Submitted by clara
on
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