You recently went shopping at a department store and you were disrespected by one of the emloyees. Writing complain letter to the sales manager of the department store.
Dear Sir or Madam
I am corresponding onions for my family. Even so ,
this
letter to you and l
am going to warn you that rude behavior
.
Usually, Change the spelling
behaviour
l
have been working in a hospital for 25 years old . My job is doctor and l
always look after for
old people. One day , Change preposition
apply
l
late
Add a missing verb
was late
my
home because our boss did not permit Correct pronoun usage
apply
to
us . Change preposition
apply
Then
we hear this
plans and new ideas and so we Correct determiner usage
these
late
. I was going Add a missing verb
are late
to
shopping after my work . Usually, Change preposition
apply
l
buy new and palatable things from department
Add an article
the department
store
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stores
where
nearby my home . But ,unfortunately, Replace the word
were
this
store
was closed because l
came back from my work too late . If l
came out early from my work this
department store
would have opened. I was going to buy some meat
, potatoes
,Correct word choice
and
l
found one store
then
l
came in to
the shop There were 2 Join the words
into
girl
and one girl was talking Change to a plural noun
girls
with
Change preposition
on
phone
. She take for granted me Add an article
the phone
a phone
l
was amazing then
l
asked from
her she gave me some Change preposition
apply
meat
, potatoes
and onions. She gave me meat
but l
assume this
meat
was spoil
and it Wrong verb form
spoiled
look
like abominable so Change the verb form
looks
l
asked from
her Change preposition
apply
Correct word choice
if you
you
should Correct pronoun usage
she
gave
me acceptable and fresh Change the verb form
give
meat
but she explained we have
not anyone . I argued Add a missing verb
did have
some
time Change preposition
for some
then
l
gave into fate and l
bought this
meat
. She was talking with her friend when she was talking
a kilo of Correct your spelling
taking
potatoes
. She was putting abominable potatoes
in package
. I Add an article
the package
a package
dissatisfied
Add a missing verb
was dissatisfied
from
Change preposition
with
this
situation and explained you
should give me palatable products but she never did it and she yelled Correct pronoun usage
I
me
. I was angry and Change preposition
at me
l
went out and l
did not buy anything because clerk
was Add an article
the clerk
deplorable
person .
I hope to you understand Add an article
a deplorable
the deplorable
me
and you can solve all my Correct pronoun usage
apply
problem
. I believe her .
Yours faithfully
Abdumalikova JasminaFix the agreement mistake
problems
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite