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percentage of dial intake of sodium,saturated fat and added sugar consumed n meals and snacks(average person USA)

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The pie charts depict the proportion of the daily intake of sodium, fat, and added sugar for the average American person in
meals
 and snacks. According to what is shown in three different diagrams, the least amount of sodium, saturated fat and sugar consumed at breakfast
meals
 compared to other
meals
 American people have the rest of the day. The percentage increased by around a quarter between 19% to 29% at lunch
meals
. According to the dinner
meals
 and snacks, the rates represent massive amounts of harmful nutrients consumed in these two
meals
 particularly, the ratio between 37 % to 43 % of sodium and saturated fat
In other words
, snacks contained significant amounts of added sugar at around 42 per cent. To sum up, we could say that, in the USA, people consumed substantial amounts of bad nutrients in their daily
meals
,
this
 is because people depend significantly on food that has a big amount of unhealthy contents.
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