Write a letter to one of your colleagues has recently been appointed as the new manager of the company. Introduce yourself Congratulate him/her on the promotion And ask for an appintment to discuss the problems in your section.
Dear Sir or Madam
Hello new manager. There are several problems that led me to write
this
letter. I am your colleague who works with you, we have done a lot with you. You have been promoted to a new position
. Congratulations on this
new position
. Rise to a higher position
. Congratulations on your promotion to this
position
. I am telling you that I cannot do anything. I wanted to meet to dicuss
Correct your spelling
discuss
this
matter. You certainly know this
. And you agree to meet with us to solve this
problem. I have to meet you. We need to discuss some issues. I think that you and the employees will definitely like it. Therefore
, I request you to arrange this
meeting.
Thank you for your attention.
Yours faithfully
Jòrayeva ShahloSubmitted by ilkhomjon.uralov97 on
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coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing could be more formal and proper, using the recipient's name and appropriate salutations.
task achievement
The letter lacks a clear and coherent structure, resulting in incomplete response to the task prompt. Consider organizing the content in an orderly manner with proper paragraphing and logical progression of ideas.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.