In many countries traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods. This is having a negative effect on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, there is a significant increase in the number of people who choose international fast
foods
, such
as hamburgers and french fries, over traditional foods
. However
, some people think that this
trend has negative effects on families and societies.
Admittedly, the making process of traditional food is generally complex, which means all family members need to involve. Thus
, when individuals are preparing ingredients and cooking traditional foods
, it is necessary for them to communicate, cooperate and interact with each other. However
, making fast foods
is much easier and more time-saving without the process of interaction. So, the popularity of fast Fix the agreement mistake
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will undermine family bonds. Besides
, traditional foods
are not only foods
,
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a symbol
the symbol
symbol
of traditional cultures. Fix the agreement mistake
symbols
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, mooncakes enjoyed by Chinese
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On the other hand
, I also
think this
phenomenon has some positive effects. To be more specific, fast foods
are suitable for most citizens leading a fast-paced life, because cooking them is not time-consuming. Therefor
, they are more likely to liberate housewives, who can have more time to pursue their hobbies and lives. Correct your spelling
Therefore
In addition
, international fast foods
also
satisfy the needs of immigrants and they do not have to change their eating habits. Therefore
, it is beneficial for a nation to welcome and embrace more talents all
over the Change preposition
from all
worlds
, due to its tolerant food culture.
In conclusion, I think that traditional fast Fix the agreement mistake
world
foods
being replaced by traditional ones do have both positive and negative influences on families and societies. In order to create a better eating culture and experiences for both domestic and international people, governments and private companies should regulate the proportion of traditional and international food restaurants.Submitted by 1378468145 on
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