In many countries traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods. This is having a negative effect on both families and societies.  To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, there is a significant increase in the number of people who choose international fast

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as hamburgers and french fries, over traditional

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, some people think that

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trend has negative effects on families and societies. Admittedly, the making process of traditional food is generally complex, which means all family members need to involve.

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, when individuals are preparing ingredients and cooking traditional

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, it is necessary for them to communicate, cooperate and interact with each other.

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, making fast

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is much easier and more time-saving without the process of interaction. So, the popularity of fast

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will undermine family bonds.

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, traditional

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are not only

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of traditional cultures.

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, mooncakes enjoyed by

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signify reunion and miss. If they disappear, what is the difference between the festival and normal days

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phenomenon has some positive effects. To be more specific, fast

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are suitable for most citizens leading a fast-paced life, because cooking them is not time-consuming.

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, they are more likely to liberate housewives, who can have more time to pursue their hobbies and lives.

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, international fast

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satisfy the needs of immigrants and they do not have to change their eating habits.

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, it is beneficial for a nation to welcome and embrace more talents

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over the

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, due to its tolerant food culture. In conclusion, I think that traditional fast

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being replaced by traditional ones do have both positive and negative influences on families and societies. In order to create a better eating culture and experiences for both domestic and international people, governments and private companies should regulate the proportion of traditional and international food restaurants.