Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter- Suggest how you could help in her home- home layout, done degree in interior design, garden maintenance, cooking Say why you would like to do this work-social cause, love connecting new people, new ideas Explain when you will and will not be available-weekdays busy not possible, weekends will be there 10am to 5pm

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Dear

Mrs.

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Barrett, I am writing

this

letter to express my interest in helping with your home, which was advertised in the local newspaper on 30th June. Not only do I have a degree in interior design but

also

have 5 years of experience. I think I can put my knowledge into good practice at your place.

Also

, I am keen on gardening so I can

also

do the layout of outdoor

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spaces the

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layout of outdoor spaces as well.

Although

I am not great at cooking, I have recently learnt various dishes through youtube so I can help with breakfast and lunch. Despite of I am busy with my

hetrich

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Petrich

Henrich

schedule, I love to help people for a social cause.

Moreover

, it gives me immense satisfaction as well as a sense of purpose in my life.

Additionally

, I love to connect with new people. As I am working in the office from Monday to Friday from 9 am to 6 pm, so I am available only via call.

However

on weekends i.e Saturday and Sunday I am available from 9 am to 4 pm. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Monica

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7 paragraphs

193 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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