Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is ? what measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?
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last
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the last
car
sales were increased enormously. Use synonyms
However
, our Linking Words
transport
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facility
are unable to accommodate Fix the agreement mistake
facilities
such
copious growth, which in turn leads to the Linking Words
traffic
Jam in most of the cities around the world. I do feel that increasing Use synonyms
the
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apply
car
ownership is one major cause of high Use synonyms
traffic
jams in big cities. The essay discusses how crowding of vehicles creates a rush on the Use synonyms
road
and Use synonyms
role
of government to reduce the same via incorporating suitable Correct article usage
the role
infrastructure
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development
.
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To begin
with, Linking Words
influence
of Add an article
the influence
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increase
of Add an article
the increase
car
owners on Use synonyms
traffic
across the major cities- the key reason was Use synonyms
high
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the high
a high
person to
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person-to-vehicle
vehicle
ratio and space constraints in Use synonyms
existing
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the existing
road
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transport
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system
. Use synonyms
Firstly
, if Linking Words
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number
of Change the article
a number
the number
car
owner Use synonyms
increase
, Use synonyms
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vehicle
per person will be higher which leads to Correct article usage
the vehicle
traffic
. Use synonyms
For instance
, earlier people depends on public Linking Words
transport
, where the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
vehicle
requirement person was less. Use synonyms
Hence
, it is apparent that Linking Words
existing
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the existing
system
can accommodate the Use synonyms
vehicle
and ultimately Use synonyms
traffic
will be less. Use synonyms
Secondly
, existing Linking Words
infrastructure
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ambiguous
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is ambiguous
the
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about the
number
of light motor vehicles Use synonyms
on
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in
transport
sector. Use synonyms
For example
, the rate of Linking Words
four wheelers
increased rapidly. But, the extension of Add a hyphen
four-wheelers
roads
, space increment, Use synonyms
additional
new Correct word choice
and additional
roads
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are
not sufficient to equalise Change the verb form
is
this
rapid change in the Linking Words
car
numbers on the Use synonyms
road
. Use synonyms
Although
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,
the Remove the comma
apply
number
of Use synonyms
four wheeler
owner increment can cause Add a hyphen
four-wheeler
traffic
, we cannot avoid Use synonyms
this
because of Linking Words
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increase
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the increase
of
population and high life expectancy in Change preposition
in
this
era.
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On the other hand
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government
can contribute to Add an article
the government
avoid
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avoiding
such
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traffic related
issues Add a hyphen
traffic-related
by
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through
road
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development
programmes and Use synonyms
give
a proper Wrong verb form
giving
traffic
rule Use synonyms
system
. Use synonyms
Firstly
, an adequate broadening and construction of new Linking Words
roads
and appropriate Use synonyms
fly overs
can resolve the issue Correct your spelling
flyovers
some
extent. Because of improving Change preposition
to some
road
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infrastructure
, Use synonyms
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system
can accommodate Add an article
the system
this
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increase
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increased
number
. Use synonyms
Secondly
, the authorities should incorporate proper Linking Words
traffic
rules and special Use synonyms
road
for four wheelers which could reduce the problems related to rush on Use synonyms
roads
. Use synonyms
This
is evident from how some of the recent Linking Words
development
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on
the Change preposition
in
infrastructure
,Use synonyms
fly overs
help to reduce the Correct your spelling
flyovers
traffic
in some cities.
To conclude, Use synonyms
by
taking an appropriate step by the government in the Change preposition
apply
transport
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system
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development
can address the Use synonyms
traffic
problems associated with big towns.Use synonyms
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