This
is the era
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globalisation and world trade and business.
This
has enabled us to keep better diplomatic and business
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with many other
countries
and
products
produced in a
country
could easily be found in another
country
.
However
,
this
requires the
products
and foods to be travelled to a long distance before reaching
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the consumers of other
countries
and
this
has both negative and positive consequences. In my opinion,
this
has far more
advantages
than
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drawbacks.
On one hand, a
country
should
first
try to be self-sufficient rather than relying heavily on imported goods. Foods, vegetables and fruits should not be imported from other
countries
since the
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travel of
such
commodities degraded their food values.
Moreover
, importing from other
countries
is quite costly.
Finally
, a
country
should try to produce daily necessities by
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as it would eradicate
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poverty,
unemploymentCorrect word choice
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and would
also
make sure the better economic progress of a
country
.
On the contrary
, the
advantages
of the global economy and trade are highlighted often and it is true that being self-sufficient for all
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quite impossible. Some
countries
are better for agriculture, some for industrial
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, some for food processing and some others for technologies and
thus
each nation has
theirCorrect pronoun usage
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unique ability to do well in some specific sectors.
Thus
no
country
can locally produce everything
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people need.
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and foremost
advantagesFix the agreement mistake
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of importing
products
from other
countries
is that a
country
can enjoy those
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of goods without even producing them.
For instance
, many
countries
enjoy tea and coffee even though they do not locally produce them.
Second
, sometimes importing is less expensive than producing something and not every
country
has the environment and manpower to do so.
Third
,
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system nowadays is becoming more efficient and in the near future, it will take less time to supply goods from another
country
to another. The global economy enables a
country
to export
products
to other nations rather than wasting them and
this
has proven to be a strong
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area for many
countries
. People nowadays have more choices of their
products
and
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economy hit the monopoly so hard that people can enjoy
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branded
products
at a competitive price.
In summary, more time to transport daily commodities from one
country
to other has some demerits.
the endless
advantages
they bring are quite overwhelming.