Because of the global economy, many goods including what we use as daily basics produced by other countries have to be transported for a long distance. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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is the era

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globalisation and world trade and business.

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has enabled us to keep better diplomatic and business

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relationships

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with many other

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and

products

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produced in a

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could easily be found in another

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.

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,

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requires the

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and foods to be travelled to a long distance before reaching

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the consumers of other

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and

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has both negative and positive consequences. In my opinion,

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has far more

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than

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drawbacks. On one hand, a

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should

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try to be self-sufficient rather than relying heavily on imported goods. Foods, vegetables and fruits should not be imported from other

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since the

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travel of

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commodities degraded their food values.

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, importing from other

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is quite costly.

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, a

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should try to produce daily necessities by

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as it would eradicate

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poverty,

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and unemployment

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and would

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make sure the better economic progress of a

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.

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, the

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of the global economy and trade are highlighted often and it is true that being self-sufficient for all

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quite impossible. Some

countries

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are better for agriculture, some for industrial

productions

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production

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, some for food processing and some others for technologies and

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each nation has

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unique ability to do well in some specific sectors.

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no

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can locally produce everything

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people need.

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and foremost

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advantages

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of importing

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from other

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is that a

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can enjoy those

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of goods without even producing them.

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, many

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enjoy tea and coffee even though they do not locally produce them.

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, sometimes importing is less expensive than producing something and not every

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has the environment and manpower to do so.

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,

transportation

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system nowadays is becoming more efficient and in the near future, it will take less time to supply goods from another

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to another. The global economy enables a

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to export

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to other nations rather than wasting them and

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has proven to be a strong

revenue earning

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area for many

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. People nowadays have more choices of their

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and

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economy hit the monopoly so hard that people can enjoy

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branded

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at a competitive price. In summary, more time to transport daily commodities from one

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to other has some demerits.

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the endless

advantages

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they bring are quite overwhelming.