One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

In these

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days,

traffic

jam

is considered

one

of the major issues in the majority of large urban areas. There are obviously significant negatives to

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trend

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since the demand towards purchasing private

cars

has increased significantly over the past few years as

such

transport means are more convenient than public transportation and

this

essay will discuss the main reasons associated with

this

issue and provide some possible solutions to avoid them.

One

of the

first

causes of

this

problem is that

,

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a

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number of people’s rate who are owning

a private vehicles

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is growing year by

years

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since nowadays more and more individuals prefer to reach their destination

by

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their personal

cars

because of the wide range availability of convenient

feature

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while creating an opportunity for humans to go anywhere at any time.

In addition

to

this

, these days the demand towards purchasing

cars

has increased and

as a result

of

increased

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number of

cars

moving

in

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norrow

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roads

has

also

become

one

of the major reasons.

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, in most large cities the

norrow

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roads

is

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considered

one

of the

seriuos

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serious

issues that

has

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to be fixed since it is

one

of the major aspects that cause

traffic

congestion.

However

,

one

very effective solution to deal with

this

complication might be to set

certain

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parking spaces and

also

by

organizing

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flexiable

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flexible

working hours to reduce the rate of rush hour traffics since most people attend

to

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the

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meeting or workplaces which take place in city centres at the same time.

Furthermore

, to decrease the

traffic

jam

government should expand the

norrow

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roads

since it helps individuals to reach their destination without facing any

traffic

problems.

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Tashkent City as an example, the country

which

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was able to fix the

traffic

jam

issues by expanding the major

roads

. To conclude, having weighed mentioned

up

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, I can come to the conclusion with that

traffic

jam

has become

one

of the primary concerns of our society in most developed cities, to solve

this

problem government should pay more

attantion

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attention

to

organize

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park

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and ride scheme and to expand the

norrow

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roads

.