You have received a job advertisement and decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the recruiter. In your letter Express your interest in the job Explain why you are suitable for this position Ask some questions about the job

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Joanna Shen and I am writing to regard to the job advertisement I received the notification from Indeed yesterday. I am highly interested in your job marketing assistant and I hope you could consider my application. As one of the

leader

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leading

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companies in

advertisement

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the advertisement

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industry, your offers always attract couples of students to compete within our major. Personally, I

also

think

this

will be a great opportunity to apply what I have learned and explore my potential in a mature platform。 As the owner of a bachelor’s degree in marketing, I believe that I am qualified for

this

position.

Firstly

, I

have

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apply

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finished all my courses with excellent achievements

last

month, and access to the title of outstanding

graduates

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graduate

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.

Secondly

, I have accumulated experience with creating social media content and simple video editing in a magazine during my holidays. I would be appreciated

if

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it if

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you could inform me

the

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of the

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duties of

this

position, the approaches

of

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to

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submitting my CV in

details

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detail

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, and the possible date of

interview

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the interview

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. I look forward to your kind reply. Yours faithfully, Joanna Shen