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Many parents are concerned about the violent computer games or movies or leisure activities. How can this impact children ? What can be done to solve this problem?.

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worried about their children. These would impact pupils' mental and physical health.
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 using reducing screening time as well as taking some stringent actions against extreme activities. Let's begin with the fatal causes
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cognitive skills but
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interpersonal skills.
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, children of the current world have no courtesy to greet near and dear ones. As a consequence children would keep their self alone which would harm them by feeling lonely.
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, it leads to fatal diseases. The online world made
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 life sedentary.
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, without any physical ,
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activities
 they have many anatomical and physiological problems.
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, juvenile diabetes, digital dry eye syndrome and obesity have been occurring in teenage due to it. To encounter these problems
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, set some boundaries for every leisure activity which plays a crucial role. Even if parents allow theme for their favourite task but the
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water would make them safe while swimming. All and all, digital use and some extreme tasks would make parents worry
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child
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