Most employees nowdays put increasing emphasis on social skills . Some people believe that social skills are important in addition to good qualifications for job success. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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have been put on the table when it comes to
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hiring
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process of employees , so the decision needs to be taken wisely to
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the requirements of a company.
However
, some say that social skills are as vital as good qualifications for getting success in a
job
. In
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sell their products. By ,
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needs objection headlining
skill
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in order to
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the requirements of
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the buyer
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.
Furthermore
, communicating with
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plays an essential role because
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behaviour is varying from
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knowledge about how to deal with everyone. Meanwhile ,
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is an important skill to run a company in a good way .
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, if employees support as well as encourage one another while doing
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then
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. Shifting towards the
second
pool of thought many jobs require educational knowledge and experience for doing it and sometimes it does not need any social skill because they do not have to deal with people .
for example
, if a scientist is finding new medicine ,
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subject
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such
as chemistry and biology. Meanwhile , many companies need employees who run a plant for them , so they have to hire
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person
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to offer
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a job
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job
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. In nutshell , I indeed think that social skills are more important than
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, but it depends on
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job
when employers hire any
person
.
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