The diagrams below show stages in the development of simple cooking equipment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
THESE DIAGRAMS ILLUSTRATE THERE VARIOUS STAGES IN THE DEVELOPMENT OF primitive MATERIAL FOR COOKING.
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THE DOOR KEEPS THE ASH INSIDE AND CONTROLS THE HEATER. IF WE GO TO UP THE LOCATION OF GRATE OF CHARCOAL.Linking Words
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