You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much. Write a letter to the restaurant to thank them. In your letter – • Mention the food, service and the atmosphere. • Suggest any improvements to make things better.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am one of your regular customers and

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celebrated my birthday at your restaurant

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week. I would like to thank you for the wonderful hospitality and delicious food which made the celebration worthwhile. I must mention that all arrangements were done perfectly with the lighting in harmony with the rustic ambience.

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could not be done without the excellent skills of your staff. The food was superb! We enjoyed all that was served from the appetizers down to the dessert.

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, I was impressed by the politeness and prompt attention given by your staff.

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, I would like to suggest some

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improvements that could be done to make your restaurant

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talk of the town. The plants around the driveway need more attention. They are not in a very appealing state.

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, I noticed some cracks on the pavement going to the entrance of the restaurant which needed to be replaced. Thank you once again for making my birthday celebration a success. Yours faithfully, Mark Nelson

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

173 words

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