You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much. Write a letter to the restaurant to thank them. In your letter – • Mention the food, service and the atmosphere. • Suggest any improvements to make things better.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am one of your regular customers and
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celebrated my birthday at your restaurant
last
week. I would like to thank you for the wonderful hospitality and delicious food which made the celebration worthwhile. I must mention that all arrangements were done perfectly with the lighting in harmony with the rustic ambience.
This
could not be done without the excellent skills of your staff. The food was superb! We enjoyed all that was served from the appetizers down to the dessert.
Moreover
, I was impressed by the politeness and prompt attention given by your staff.
Additionally
, I would like to suggest some
further
improvements that could be done to make your restaurant
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talk of the town. The plants around the driveway need more attention. They are not in a very appealing state.
Furthermore
, I noticed some cracks on the pavement going to the entrance of the restaurant which needed to be replaced. Thank you once again for making my birthday celebration a success. Yours faithfully, Mark Nelson
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