In many places women are taking jobs which are traditionally done by men. What do you think make these change happen. What's your opinion about it.

In recent times, gender equality became a trend in many places.

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are

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continuously

improving

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there are capable as

men

in many fields. In

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of

this

trend and

thus

lead to a logical conclusion. There is adequate evidence

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are

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obtainable

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substantiated reasons. The top-notch reason is

increasing

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number

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of working

women

in every household due to family

finanicial

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financial

issues.

As a result

, many

men

are losing their

job

. To probe more deeply,

women

are more intelligent and smart than

men

,

therefore

many

men

's

job

is in critical position

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in IT

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.

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it's apparent why many

of

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people

in

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favor

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of

this

trend. What is known as half empty for

other

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may appear as full half for some

.

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in general

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tends

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to distinguish that some of the jobs are required more stamina and physical strength.

For instance

, In the firefighter stream,

men

are the right candidates for

this

position due to their guts and physical strength to carry

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ton

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of

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. Another observation related

in

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this

regards

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is that

women

are not capable

to

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of

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extending more hours to work or

not

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are not

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suits

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for night shift

job

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jobs

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because

women

are the

pilllars

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pillars

of their

home

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. they have hold

alot

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a lot

of

responsibilites

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responsibilities

responsibility

in

homes

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their homes

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.Needless to say, all these points stand in good stead. In recapitulation, I reiterate that there

are

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strong

factor

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supporting that many

occusion

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occasion

occasions

,

women

are proving that there are capable as

men

,

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person

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are enrich

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in knowledge

in

particular

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field

then

capable to hold the position.

Therefore

, check the

job

requirement to which candidates fulfil

job

demands

instead

of gender.

Consequently

, I firmly agree with the given statement.