In addition to your full-time job, you are taking a 15-hour Computer Science course. You now find that you cannot continue with the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter: · Describe your schedule and situation · Explain why you cannot continue the course · Say what action you would like to take

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Dear Ms Franklin, I am writing

this

letter to discontinue my Computer Science course which was booked by your Learning Acamedy company. I recently moved into a critical science project and hardly get any time for extra activities.

Firstly

, I am too occupied with my full-time work and unable to join physical classes.

Secondly

, there is no time available for me during weekends due to my busy schedule. There is a lot of sales pressure to achieve business revenue and most of the company's staff are overloaded with work. The entire team is working 16-18 hours a day from Monday to Friday.

Furthermore

, my current project will end only after six months and my company will move me to a different location. I won't be able to continue in

this

situation so would request you to refund half the fees as mentioned in the agreement. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Sam

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