Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss these views and give your own opinion.

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People have different approaches toward the matter of opinion whether university students should only study the subjects which are closely related to science and technology or they have
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extent of freedom to choose whatever they like to study. On the one hand, when it comes to the necessity of the world, it is crystal clear that
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to be more useful. To be more precise, the modern world requires specialization compared to
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decades due to the complexity of the problems human beings have been facing every day. To tackle some harsh medical problems, cancer
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experts whose knowledge deep enough to help patients sustain.
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, people should respect the graduated students’ privacy.
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society are vital, they should be given
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to select whatever seems required and
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to study.
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, life has
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of aspects considered as a significant part needed to nurture. According to a Persian proverb that
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‘healthy brain can exist in a healthy emotion’, it is genuinely concluded that enriching knowledge in irrelevant aspects of an expert has a direct and effective impact on his or her performance. In conclusion, while the world we are living in is becoming a place where everything is specialized and markets demand more thorough skills compared to the past, students are not only reliable to supply the others ‘demand. They are in parallel
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in several private issues which require knowledge, skill and experience.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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