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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

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The provided bar graph depicts
water
 consumption for three main purposes in six different areas namely North
America
, Europe, Africa, Central
Asia
, and Southeast
Asia
. Overall, a major portion of
water
 consumption could be observed in the agriculture sector and
this
 was higher in African and Asian regions than that in American and European parts. More than 80% of
water
 in
America
 and
Asia
 went into the agriculture sector. While
this
 percentage was only 32% in Europe and 39% in North
America
, as well as South
America
, shows the highest ratio of 71% in
South
Correct article usage
the South
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America
 in agricultural use.
Water
 used by the industrial sector in North
America
 and Europe was (48% and 53%, respectively) which was more than the Asian counties.
Moreover
,
water
 used by households in Africa was 9%, and central and Southeast
Asia
 demonstrates 7%.
In addition
, African countries like South
America
 have consumption 19% of
water
 for domestic use.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
  • variations
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