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Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But others believe that teenage should focus on the subject that they are best at or that they find the most interest

#people #teenagers #school #subjects #focus #interest
For tender age
people
 it is essential to volunteer in their spare time,as some
people
 believe.
Personally
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 l fully agree with the statement as it helps them to combat
with
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mental problems and enhance their potential. Working in an unpaid job has 2 apex benefits.
First
 and foremost,teenagers can boost their communication skills since they may have
enhance
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 to talk with various types of
people
.
Consequently
, they will know how to treat
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 to
people
's
charachter
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character
.
In addition
 to
this
,these teenagers are highly likely not to fall into depression,because, they will have a number of thoughts on their
mind
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minds
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 concerning
about
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good deeds.
For instance
,the volunteers who take care of older adults do ponder about elevating the old
people
's life,so they may not think about the thoughts which cause them detrimental
effect
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.
Additionally
, some
of
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the
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young
people
 can have an opportunity to enhance their perfection,since they may desire to be teachers and by teaching they may gain experience.To illustrate ,
the
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people
 from an
English speaking
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country
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countries
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 who plan to be an English
teacher
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teachers
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 can acquire experience by working abroad as
an
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English
tutors
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.
Moreover
,it can lead to
healthy
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 lifestyle,as some of them can do physical activities
such
 as walking to deliver goods. In conclusion,I opine that volunteering in their leisure time is advantageous not to their overall development but
also
 to their health and social life.
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