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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant examples if necessary.

#salary #job #satisfaction
It is often argued that having a huge payout is more necessary than the contentment of the
job
 itself. I completely agree because nowadays human well-being depends on fee amount and sacrificштп by pleasure from
work
 is not the largest price for ensuring a safe future.
To begin
 with, nowadays wage is one of the most important parts of human society and it provides a safe future. Every aspect of human being costs a lot of money, but today there are so many
people
 who spend most of their pay-out on basic needs. After that they do not have a coin for their own wishes: many want to travel abroad, study at university, do training at the gym and do some other activities. According to that, a big wage is more important than
job
 satisfaction and it helps for good living and survival. Everything surrounding us has a price and if
people
 can spend money without hesitation it makes them happier.
On the other hand
, there are some pros to a big income. To achieve a high level of salary, you need to
work
 really hard and it is a good motivation. Hard-working folk are going to have career growth, and as a
,
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 result they will have respect among their colleagues, neighbours and chefs,
meanwhile
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 it helps to create good relationships and a fine network. Earning a lot of cash gives satisfaction too and please, notice that
people
 are not obliged to
work
 during their whole life at an unloved
job
, because they have the opportunity to leave when they earn enough and start their own business or
work
 on their hobbies. Of course, folk can begin everything without money in a banking account, but it will be a long way with a number of problems and troubles. To sum up,
job
 satisfaction is good but earning a big salary makes
people
 more confident,
motivated
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and motivated
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 and provides a safe present and future without any issues. (38 min)
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • remuneration
  • financial security
  • motivation
  • luxuries
  • material possessions
  • fulfillment
  • work-life balance
  • stress levels
  • mental well-being
  • job security
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