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population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050.

The following table illustrates the
population
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 figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figures for 2025 and 2050.
First
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, we have Argentina whose
population
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 in 2003 was 34
million
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, Argentina is the least populated country on the list, expected to grow to 48
million
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 by 2025 and 62
million
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 by the
year
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 2050.
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, we have Indonesia with the highest
population
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 of 238
million
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 in 2003 which is predicted to increase to 274
million
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 in the
year
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 2025 and by 2050 it will be 312
million
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. While other countries show a gradual increase in the populace in upcoming years, Italy
on the other hand
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 has a
population
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 of 54
million
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 which is projected to decrease in the
year
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 2025 to 47
million
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 and it will be down to 45
million
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 in the
year
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 2050. At
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, we have the republic of Korea which had 48
million
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 citizens in the
year
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 2003 the number will increase to 52
million
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 by 2025 and will remain the same till the
year
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 2050. To sum up, we can say that countries like Argentina and Indonesia will have steady growth by the
year
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 2050. Italy will show a significant
population
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 decline, and the Republic of Korea will have a constant
population
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 from the
year
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 2025 to 2050.

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