It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be. Give reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together.

Nowadays many people

busy

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with their work and other social activities. Due to that fact all families

not

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are not

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close together.

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, all

human

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running

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for

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the

achieve

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future goals.

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, they could

be

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live close together with make Some

life

decision

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. On the one hand,

the

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all family members have their own responsibility,

because

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and because

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of that, some

of

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apply

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the adult

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adult

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adults

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need to work hard and earn money.

Also

, children have to

studying

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well due to get better job

opportunity

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in future.

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, they make

a

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dream purchase good houses and cars, because all people hope better

life

standard.

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, they are often running

with

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to

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achieve

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their goal

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goal

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and do not have

time

to be with their

love

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ones.

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, my father was a good

business man

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businessman

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and often work hard for improved his business because he knew without money he could not provide us

good

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education, and

future

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a future

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.

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, he

do

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not have

a

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time

expend with us.

Moreover

, nowadays many family members expend their

time

with

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on

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social

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the social

a social

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network

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networks

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.

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,

the

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Face book

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has been using many

human

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humans

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and

addicted

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to it. They

are

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often

to

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upload photos and

chatting

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with friends.

Consequently

, they forget to expend

time

with their Love ones when they

at

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home.

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is the reason that people

away

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from

the

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family.

However

, they can make some possible changes

with

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in

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their

life

and could make good

relationship

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relationships

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others

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with others

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.

Firstly

, they should make good

conversation

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conversations

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with each family member and need to arrange

time

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a time

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.

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, some

of

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apply

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the

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families take dinner together and avoid using

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their phone

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phone

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when they had dinner.

Also

,

this

is the

time

could speak

each

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other. In conclusion,

busiest

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the busiest

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life

and immense social network

harmful

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are harmful

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for

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to

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family relations and could make

strong

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a strong

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relationship

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relationships

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with make some possible changes in their

life

.