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the consumption of three basic foods (wheat, maize, rice) by people in four different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table below describes the Consumption of 3 basic foods in 4 different countries. The basic foods are Wheat,
Maize
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 and Rice and the countries are
Cambodia
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,
Poland
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, Egypt and Mexico. We will start with 1st basic food which is Rice, people in
Cambodia
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 consume more rice in comparison with other countries, with 1445
calories
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 per person per day, in
Poland
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 19
calories
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 are consumed, Egypt stands at number 2 with 501
calories
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 and Mexico is
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 with 57
calories
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.
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 basic food is Wheat Egypt is the highest among all with 1095
calories
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,
Poland
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 is in
second
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 position with 865
calories
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, Mexico is
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 with 275
Calories
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 and
last
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 is
Cambodia
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 by18
calories
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. The
last
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 basic food is
Maize
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, Mexican people consumed
maize
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 in high quantities which is 1083
calories
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, Egyptians are in
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 position with 578
calories
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,
Cambodia
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 is 3rd with 103
Calories
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 and
Poland
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 people do not prefer to eat
Maize
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. To summarize the table, different country has different eating habits and
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 they consume so much of
calories
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 based on the same.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • basic foods
  • staples
  • dietary preferences
  • agricultural output
  • nutritional intake
  • per capita
  • predominant
  • subsistence crops
  • culinary habits
  • food security
  • statistical overview
  • consumption patterns
  • comparative analysis
  • domestic production
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