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the consumption of three basic foods (wheat, maize, rice) by people in four different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table below describes the Consumption of 3 basic foods in 4 different countries. The basic foods are Wheat,
Maize
 and Rice and the countries are
Cambodia
,
Poland
, Egypt and Mexico. We will start with 1st basic food which is Rice, people in
Cambodia
 consume more rice in comparison with other countries, with 1445
calories
 per person per day, in
Poland
 19
calories
 are consumed, Egypt stands at number 2 with 501
calories
 and Mexico is
third
 with 57
calories
.
Second
Correct article usage
The second
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 basic food is Wheat Egypt is the highest among all with 1095
calories
,
Poland
 is in
second
 position with 865
calories
, Mexico is
third
 with 275
Calories
 and
last
 is
Cambodia
 by18
calories
. The
last
 basic food is
Maize
, Mexican people consumed
maize
 in high quantities which is 1083
calories
, Egyptians are in
second
 position with 578
calories
,
Cambodia
 is 3rd with 103
Calories
 and
Poland
 people do not prefer to eat
Maize
. To summarize the table, different country has different eating habits and
hence
 they consume so much of
calories
 based on the same.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • basic foods
  • staples
  • dietary preferences
  • agricultural output
  • nutritional intake
  • per capita
  • predominant
  • subsistence crops
  • culinary habits
  • food security
  • statistical overview
  • consumption patterns
  • comparative analysis
  • domestic production
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