Climate change is a phenomenon that affects countries all over the world. Many people strongly believe that it is the responsibility of individuals, rather than corporations and governments, to deal with this problem. To what extent do you agree?

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change

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a global issue than in past years. A group of

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argue that it is the responsibility of citizens rather than officialdoms and corporations. I disagree with

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notion as

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can do only a few things like recycling and use of public transport

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governments and corporations,

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, can implement novel innovations to

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greenhouse

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like carbon dioxide and nitrous oxide

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and

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deforestation by planting trees.

Climate

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change

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problems are not only the

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of residents. They have a great many responsibilities in the workplace

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in their personal life. By

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order to get a good amount of income, one resident or a citizen has to perform well in the workplace. To perform well, one has to focus and do work flawlessly. In their personal life, one has taken care of their children in their education, health, and wealth.In between the aforementioned responsibilities, a citizen might recycle plastic

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glass products to curb

climate

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change

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,

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measures are beyond their

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.

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, in India, about 65 per cent of residents do recycle since 2000.

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, the government have more than half of the

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in

climate

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change

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issue. The key responsibility is controlling the greenhouse

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from the use of fossil fuels

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as coal, oil, and natural

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. By

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of the power-generating plants

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on fossil fuel and

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expell

toxic fumes like carbon dioxide and nitrous oxide into the atmosphere may pave the way for global warming and ozone depletion. In order to curb

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situation, the authorities have to invent new replacements. Another pertinent

duty

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is

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control

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deforestation. To explain, nowadays, a great many manufacturers cut down trees from forests for making furniture which leads to soil erosion and global warming.

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, fossil fuel-using vehicles and industries

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toxic fumes which are detained significantly by trees from forests. If deforestation occurs, the number of toxic

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will be increased in the atmosphere and promote global warming. In conclusion, I believe that climatic changes are the

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of the

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the government with

corporative

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corporate

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companies. In order to

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this

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scenario

people

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have to recycle used products and the authorities have to innovate and invent novel ideas.