The maps below show one part of a small town called Springsby as it is now, and plans for how it might be developed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Task 1 In the pictures previously shown, we could see some of the main focus characteristics from a Road area called: Springsby Wester, as we all know, all

buildings

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constructions always start their projects by having an elaborating plan, what I see over here, is that the plan they had at the beginning was only designed to have just the basic and mandatory areas in the location. Through

the

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time

,

due to

the growing population, Springby Western has considerably changed now, we can see the creation of a

verity

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of Shopping

centers

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which are located one of them in the north direction and the other one in the south, these shopping

center

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also

have their own private parking lot,

besides

there is

huge

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parking area in front of the school with a bus station which there not used be there before. Close to

the

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Weste

road

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they

resize

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and

re name

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the street by giving it a name which is the park avenue. In conclusion, and from my point of view I clearly see that

the

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time

is just passing by quickly, it means that in the near

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futures

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this

world is going to be very populated. (195 words) Task 2 There is an opinion that says that anything

that is

good for you can

also

be bad if you

over do

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it. I totally agree with

this

phrase because some examples,

such

as consuming too much fast street food could lead to obesity or the use of cell phones or electronic machines for a long

while

could damage our mental and visual strength. First of all, many people do not realize that consuming too much fast street food can be harmful to well-being, since all the ingredients can contain a bunch of preservatives and dyes-stuff that can affect our body and lead us to obesity, as an example many years ago, I lived alone, worked and studied at the same

time

and did not have

time

to cook and I resorted to buying fast food, For me, it was good because it quickly solved my diet, but at the same,

time

it was not a big deal because it was affecting my health and my body, leading me to have serious health problems.

However

, my low self-esteem made me turn to the doctor

recommending

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a bullet-ridden diet and

taking

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some exercise routines.

On the other hand

, today's generation, uses many electronic devices to facilitate our daily lives, whether for entertainment, work or study,

however

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we forget that life could be much better if we used less of these types of electronic devices

as well as

our parents, who did not have the opportunity to understand or manipulate any type of devices as it is now the computer and the cell phone. In

conclusion

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these two simple examples show my opinion of using something excessively, and I am sure that it will always have terrible results for everyone. (287 words) Written by Shirley Adriana Ospina Manzano Student Number 250834