Task 1 In the pictures previously shown, we could see some of the main focus characteristics from a Road area called: Springsby Wester, as we all know, all
buildings
constructions always start their projects by having an elaborating plan, what I see over here, is that the plan they had at the beginning was only designed to have just the basic and mandatory areas in the location. Through Fix the agreement mistake
building
the
Correct article usage
apply
time
, Use synonyms
due to
the growing population, Springby Western has considerably changed now, we can see the creation of a Linking Words
verity
of Shopping Correct your spelling
variety
centers
which are located one of them in the north direction and the other one in the south, these shopping Change the spelling
centres
center
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centre
also
have their own private parking lot, Linking Words
besides
there is Linking Words
huge
parking area in front of the school with a bus station which there not used be there before. Close to Add an article
a huge
the
Weste Correct article usage
apply
road
they Capitalize word
Road
resize
and Wrong verb form
resized
re name
the street by giving it a name which is the park avenue. In conclusion, and from my point of view I clearly see that Correct your spelling
renamed
the
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apply
time
is just passing by quickly, it means that in the near Use synonyms
Fix the agreement mistake
future
futures
Add a comma
futures,
this
world is going to be very populated. (195 words) Task 2 There is an opinion that says that anything Linking Words
that is
good for you can Linking Words
also
be bad if you Linking Words
over do
it. I totally agree with Correct your spelling
overdo
this
phrase because some examples, Linking Words
such
as consuming too much fast street food could lead to obesity or the use of cell phones or electronic machines for a long Linking Words
while
could damage our mental and visual strength. First of all, many people do not realize that consuming too much fast street food can be harmful to well-being, since all the ingredients can contain a bunch of preservatives and dyes-stuff that can affect our body and lead us to obesity, as an example many years ago, I lived alone, worked and studied at the same Linking Words
time
and did not have Use synonyms
time
to cook and I resorted to buying fast food, For me, it was good because it quickly solved my diet, but at the same, Use synonyms
time
it was not a big deal because it was affecting my health and my body, leading me to have serious health problems. Use synonyms
However
, my low self-esteem made me turn to the doctor Linking Words
recommending
a bullet-ridden diet and Wrong verb form
recommended
taking
some exercise routines. Verb problem
apply
On the other hand
, today's generation, uses many electronic devices to facilitate our daily lives, whether for entertainment, work or study, Linking Words
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however
we forget that life could be much better if we used less of these types of electronic devices Add a comma
however,
as well as
our parents, who did not have the opportunity to understand or manipulate any type of devices as it is now the computer and the cell phone. In Linking Words
conclusion
these two simple examples show my opinion of using something excessively, and I am sure that it will always have terrible results for everyone. (287 words) Written by Shirley Adriana Ospina Manzano Student Number 250834Add a comma
conclusion,
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