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The charts below show the production of different types of citrus fruit in Brazil, China and USA. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.

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The pie charts illustrate the shares of different citrus fruits in the
production
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 of three countries, namely,
Brazil
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,
China
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 and the
USA
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. Overall, the most striking feature of the charts is that each country specializes in just one type of
fruit
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, despite growing all of them.
This
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 specialization is particularly clear in
Brazil
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 where the
production
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 of oranges represents 87% of the total, whereas, in both
China
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 and the
USA
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, the predominant
fruit
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 makes up a little under
three-quaters
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three quarters
 of the total.
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Brazil
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 and the
USA
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 produce mainly oranges.
China
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 favours tangerines, a
fruit
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 which claims only 6% of the total in
Brazil
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 and a mere 3% in the
USA
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. It is
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 evident that in both
China
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 and the
USA
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,
production
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 is somewhat more varied compared to
Brazil
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, since in both countries a
second
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fruit
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, oranges in
China
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 and grapefruit in the
USA
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 represent between 16% and 18% of the total. Across all three countries, lemon
producion
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production
 is relatively small, never exceeding the 7% recorded in the
USA
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, and reaching a low of just 1% in
Brazil
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.
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, grapefruit
production
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 varies, from as high as 16% in the
USA
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 to much lower levels of 5% and 4% in
Brazil
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 and
China
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, respectively.
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