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you are supposed to go on an interview in a few weeks, byt you have since found out you can not go on the date arranged. write a letter to the potential employer. in your letter tell them why you need to move the interview time ask the change the interview date explain that you are still intersted in being interviewed for the job

#interview #weeks #byt #date #employer #move #time #change #job
Dear
Mr.
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Smith, I am writing in the hope that I am set
appointment
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an appointment
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interview
 with your secretary
in
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apply
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last
 month.
unfortunately
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 I am not coming to
21th
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in
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of
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next
 month.
that
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 reason, my wedding s friend
exactly
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the
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on the
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 same date but I am asking you
it
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if it
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 would
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possible
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change
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to change
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date
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the date
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my
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of my
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interview
. I am ready for any time you will invite
to
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apply
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me for
interview
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an interview
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, so
if
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apply
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would
you
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apply
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possible
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 notice to me before
come
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 to
interview
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the interview
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.
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in
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next
 month, from
22th
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22nd
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 to 30th is suitable
I
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so I
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can
ready
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be ready
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 for
interview
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the interview
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. I am of course very
intersted
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interested
 in
position
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the position
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 and feel that
coach
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coaching
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 football
extermly
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extremely
relate
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relates
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 to my personality because I have
gratuted
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graduated
 physical education and 10
years
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exprience
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experience
about
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this
 job. once again, my apologies for the inconvenience and hope that we can reschedule. Your Sincerely, Mohammad Javad Shafahi
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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