You recently attend a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. -Say where you think you left the paper -Explain why they are so important - Tell the manager what you want him/her to do

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I have forgotten to carry essential
documents
with me when I left
meeting
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room. Our Company booked
for
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a business meeting at the Shangrila hotel on 02/01/2012 and I
also
attended
to
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that meeting.
Therefore
, I am the person who
conducting
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the Conference and it is running for six hours.
Furthermore
, that meeting was highly essential for our company because we
singed
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signed
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special
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a special
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agreement on that day. Unfortunately, I forgot to take those
documents
with me and I believe I left
on
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them on
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the
conferance
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conference
table. Because on that day I had
a
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another meeting in
the
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different location.
That is
the reason I forgot to carry my
documents
with me.
Therefore
, I would like to suggest
from
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you that please seek my document in the lost and found department and
also
contact me as soon as possible whether
,
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you have those
documents
. I
am look
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forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully. Sam.
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