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Summarise the information about the process of making carbonated drinks by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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THe
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 process starts with the drink in water format and ends with the carbonated drink being delivered. The
first
 step is to collect and clean the water, which passes through a filter to purify it. The
next
 stage is heating evaporation and carbonation, where the product passes through heaters and in sequence, the carbon dioxide is added to them in a tank. To proceed, the water goes to a tank with the colourant, the syrup and the flavour. After these ingredients’ insertion, the tanks pass through a mixing step and are sent to a filter. With these stages completed, the product is ready and the machine starts to fill the bottles and cans, so the drink is ready
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 consumption. With the production process completed, the drinks can be packaged and sent to the final client,
such
 as the supermarket.
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