Since the 18th century technological advances have replaced people in the workplace.with today's technology this process is happening at a greater rate.Technology is increasinly responsible for unemployment. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

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it is argued
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from the
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technology started I take the place of human labour and machinery is playing a vital role in our everyday life and industries
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some people believe that machinery can be one of the main causes of the growing unemployment rate which I extremely agree.
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with, automation
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to be faster and more accurate.
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, companies prefer to use mechanical or technological devices rather than workers in order to boost their efficiency.
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, automatic blenders which are used in industrial bakeries make large-scale production as quick as possible.
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, mathematicians and architects use artificial intelligence so they can access
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calculations.
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, machinery is usually cheaper than
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force and since the company doesn't have to pay for wages or salaries, machines make production more profitable than workers.
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, manufactories usually decide to use mechanical hands to assemble products rather than hiring five men to do so they don't have to pay.
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,
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automation
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since it needs people for regular
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maintenance
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reparing
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repairing
machiness
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machines
and computers in case they were broken or
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. to
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companies
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hier
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hire
experts to
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prevent
holding
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production due to crashing technological devices. in conclusion, I would say that
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of technology is responsible for decreasing the demand for the labour force by offering cheap, fast and accurate alternatives.
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, there are working
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opportunities
that are created because of
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innovations
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and computers.
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